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初中英语作文 百年奋进，时代有我？

Life is a mirror. If we smile to her, she would also return the happiness to us. But if we cry, she would be disappointed.

　　Therefore, we should be positive toward life, so as to get happiness.

　　Actually, happiness is everywhere if we keep a good attitude. As we keep a good mood, our world will be a sunny land, which is resounded with soft music.

　　However, if we are pessimists, we'll find our world is full of darkness.

　　While on the other side, happiness is not a destination but a journey. Because there's no paradise at all, but we can make a paradise if we're hard-working and intelligent.

　　So we should work like we don't need money, smile like we've never been hurt, and perform ourselves like no one can see us.

初中英语作文怎么写？

你好！很荣幸有机会回答你的问题。这篇作文给分基本合理，书写再优美些可得8分，可能是因为书写和条理问题低打了一档。那么怎样才能让自己的作文得高分呢？下面我从四个方面谈谈自己的观点和对学生作文的指导：

英语作文和中文作文一样，要想得高分必须把握以下四点：1、书写要认真、字体要规范、优美；英语字母的书写应做到力度、圆韵、饱满。衡水体书法很有视觉冲击力，给人美的享受，平时可练习一下，对提高作文得分会有很大的帮助；2、内容要充实，写够字数；初中九年英语作文一般可写10到15句话，每句话4到8个单词不等。七、八年级作文可少写3～2句。3、条理要清晰 ，层次要分明；开头、结尾要照应；根据不同题材的作文，在动笔开写之前要在思想上先构思、打个草稿。确定要写的10～15句话的内容并组织好语言的先后顺序，然后开始下笔认真的书写；4、要学会扩句和跳跃：书写时有些句子用词不多、没有力度。为了增强句子的感染力度、增加含词量，可对草稿中的句子进行修饰。对不会写的单词可用同意或近意的词语替代。我把它叫着“拉皮筋和跳跃”。比如添加一些修饰词语把句子拉长，达到增加词数的目的，这叫拉皮筋。比如：I have a friend. 添加good拉长为：l have a good friend。He likes sports. 拉长为：He likes sports very much.那如何跳跃呢?再比如要表达：他总是有自己的思想。“思想”的英语表达不会，那就换一种说法：他总是有自己的观点。He always has his own ideas. 用ideas替代不会写的thoughts. 这就是“跳跃”。

如若做到了以上几点，那么作文得分是不会低的。但愿我的回答对你有所帮助。欢迎就英语学习的问题开展讨论。